My sweet lover is everything I could want.
She is beautiful and easygoing.
In the garden, it is so romantic resting in our favorite place in the warmth of the sun for hours, just being together.
She is a hard worker and keeps house for me perfectly. I love to sit besides her in the evenings as she practices her rural crafts of spinning, while I enjoy the sun going down over Exmoor.
She keeps our home tidy and the food she brings me is tasty and plentiful.
Everything about her excites me to such enormous passion; her wonderful legs, her soft hair ...
Soon tonight we will make love and, afterwards, we will lie together in the evening sun with her wrapped all around me.
It will be so romantic and I will be ready to give myself to her body and soul.
It fills me full of pride to think that I can help my love - by becoming her next meal - to produce a new generation of young garden spiders.
The End
Rob Hopcott
Enjoyed this? You may also enjoy Saying Goodbye Hurts.
This short romantic postcard fiction spider love story is copyright Rob Hopcott 2008, all rights reserved. All characters and places in this flash short postcard fiction rural garden spider story and other free on-line humor, short stories, flash fictions, micro-fictions, sudden fictions, post card fictions or very short stories on this site, are fictitious and no reference is intended to any person or organization, living or otherwise.
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
My Perfect Lover - a romantic postcard fiction short love story by Rob Hopcott
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14 comments:
Blimey Rob ... I began to read this and I honestly thought you were writing about your wife (maybe I'm naive) and the suddenly I realized that you were about to be gobbled up by a ...... spider!
Enjoyed the unexpected ending very much.
Thanks Monique :-)
It's nice to know it worked. I do love a story to have a twist. It must be my strange and convoluted personality.
Thank you for taking the time to revisit my humble abode :-)
The last paragraph is a dynamite ending. It really makes the whole piece. Well done -:)
Thanks Billy, you are most kind :-)
This was a nice one. Thanks for visiting my blog. Man, you sure have a lot of blogs yourself. Where do you find the strength?
Charles, thanks for your kind words.
Writing is what I do and the medium for much of my writing is my blogs.
However, it would be a lonely existence without great guys like yourself to chat to as I work.
Your blog is particularly impressive and I shall certainly be back over to visit often.
Thanks for visitng my blog! I've enjoyed browsing yours. i really like the driftwood photography! I enjoyed this story too and the twist at the end
Thanks for visiting crafty green poet and your kind words.
You can be sure I will be back to visit your excellent site :-)
Rob: Thank you for visiting my humble blog. You are "the real thing." Enjoyed this piece and felt the same as Monique. I see that Charles G. has been here to "read" you. You are in good company then. Lovely work.
Donnetta
Thank you Donnetta, I look forward to reading your next piece :-)
Poor little spider.
If I come back as a spider I pray that I remain female :-D
Lovely short story Rob!
Thanks Miladysa, it's especially nice to receive kind words from an accomplished writer like yourself :-)
How interesting . . .
Garden Fiction!
. . . Not that my blog is fiction . . .
Esther Montgomery
ESTHER IN THE GARDEN
awesome! :D
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