<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post8382783706412524099..comments</id><updated>2008-04-27T04:00:21.003-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Comments on Online Collection of Flash Fiction, Micro-fiction, Short Short Stories, Very Short Stories: One more step - a flash fiction very short story a...</title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/feeds/8382783706412524099/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html'/><author><name>Rob Hopcott</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07802521115618353098</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>4</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-5366609710892904916</id><published>2008-04-27T04:00:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-04-27T04:00:00.000-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Miladysa, I awoke this Saturday morning with this ...</title><content type='html'>Miladysa, I awoke this Saturday morning with this story in my head with its 'one more step' theme. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Originally, I was going to put off writing it until Monday but it kept pressing me and wouldn't go away.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;In the end, I sat down and finished the initial writing at midday by which time I was fairly emotionally wrecked.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I knew of this seat high up above Horner on Exmoor and so went out and took the pictures to support the story and calm myself down.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Boyward and Daffy, thank you so much for your kind words. Writing this story generated in me powerful feelings and I am so happy to be reassured it worked for others too.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;BTW, the 'one more step' refrain was inspired by thoughts of the Wessex Folk Festival songwriting conversation I had wondered about entering (well spotted Daffy). It has to have a nautical theme so it would have to be 'one more step' up the rigging or something similar.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Isn't it strange how our creative minds can slide from one thing to another?</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/5366609710892904916'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/5366609710892904916'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html?showComment=1209294000000#c5366609710892904916' title=''/><author><name>Rob Hopcott</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07802521115618353098</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='05691799323437467912'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-8382783706412524099' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/posts/default/8382783706412524099' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-8569394469555468879</id><published>2008-04-26T22:22:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-04-26T22:22:00.000-07:00</updated><title type='text'>I felt this could have been a piece of music itsel...</title><content type='html'>I felt this could have been a piece of music itself.. the way it read. Quite, tender undertones and then heading swiftly to an exhilarating climax. A wonderful reading experience.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/8569394469555468879'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/8569394469555468879'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html?showComment=1209273720000#c8569394469555468879' title=''/><author><name>daffy</name><uri>http://daffy.wordpress.com/</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-8382783706412524099' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/posts/default/8382783706412524099' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-5834084585088276979</id><published>2008-04-26T16:46:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-04-26T16:46:00.000-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Excellent, very tranquil and 'at peace'.</title><content type='html'>Excellent, very tranquil and 'at peace'.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/5834084585088276979'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/5834084585088276979'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html?showComment=1209253560000#c5834084585088276979' title=''/><author><name>boyward</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00804594765996693452</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-8382783706412524099' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/posts/default/8382783706412524099' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-5498439509536993233</id><published>2008-04-26T12:31:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2008-04-26T12:31:00.000-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Very touching.Did the seat inspire this one Rob?</title><content type='html'>Very touching.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Did the seat inspire this one Rob?</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/5498439509536993233'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/8382783706412524099/comments/default/5498439509536993233'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html?showComment=1209238260000#c5498439509536993233' title=''/><author><name>Miladysa</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/08065128196666157541</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://www.onlineflashfiction.com/2008/04/one-more-step-flash-fiction-very-short.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7545741933775107147.post-8382783706412524099' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7545741933775107147/posts/default/8382783706412524099' type='text/html'/></entry></feed>